No Light, Chapter 10 Updated

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Hey Everyone,

Here is Chapter 10: Her of my Three Lives, Three Worlds, Ten Miles of Peach Blossoms AU Fanfic.

One thing to note: while going through the previous chapters, I realized the story’s time line did not match up at all with what happened in the drama. Honestly, it just wasn’t on my radar while writing the previous chapters. Since, even if the two spend 3 months in the mortal realm, that equates to maybe 6 hours in the Immortal realm, I had to go back and tweak the story a little bit; my obsessive personality just wouldn’t let it go.  So, in this chapter, we get a hint of what these two have been doing in those three months in addition to the domestic life they’ve been living at Mt. Junji.

One of the crucial paragraphs now covering this in Chapter 8 now reads:

The two of them had spent the past few months together, falling into an easy rhythm of domesticity that had surprised her. They’d gone back and forth between both the mortal and immortal realms, spending time together in leisure activities. Most days, after awakening in the morning, Ye Hua would prepare breakfast with Bai Qian’s reluctant assistance. The two would then spend the rest of the morning together, taking a walk, discussing favorite subjects, before returning to the hut. Ye Hua then did his work, and Bai Qian read her novels at the table near him. The afternoon came and with it, food preparation, continued reading, and then dinner before a nightly stroll and then bed. Most days, it was the same routine. But on other days, Ye Hua would pull the Goddess away for trips to the immortal realms.

Why was it that she didn’t find any of it boring? Even as she had spent a large part of her youth traveling with Fourth Brother, doing the same things that she did with Ye Hua now? Was it because she was with him?

And in Chapter 9 from Bai Qian’s point of view, as she is running away from Ye Hua:

The past few months with Ye Hua at Mt. Junji had been like a fantasy that she was fulfilling for the mortal she used to be. She’d felt that mortal rejoicing inside of her when Ye Hua cooked for her or walked with her. When he sought out her company, dragged her to other places, or cared for her in some small way. At times, she became weak, secretly reveling in the fulfillment of the dreams that the mortal had dreamt.

I felt that this absolutely needed to be in there to make the story’s timeline match the drama. Apologies for any confusion! As you can see, this is why I’m a fanfic writer and don’t do this professionally. 😛

Overall, this became a difficult chapter to write because of the above, and I’m still not completely satisfied with it, but it’s up now. 🙂

Hope you like the chapter! Don’t forget to leave a comment if you did.

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No Light, Chapter 9 Updated

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Hey everyone,

Here is Chapter 9: Merely of my Three Lives, Three Worlds Ten Miles of Peach Blossoms AU Fanfic.

Apologies for the long wait. I have always been a slow writer, so I hope you can be patient with my uploads. I will do my best to update in a timely manner, and I promise that I will finish the fanfic.

Leave a comment if you like the chapter. 🙂

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Beauty’s Alluring Smile, Chapter 6 Updated

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Hey Everyone,

Here is Chapter 6 When KO Moved Out of Beauty’s Alluring Smile. This chapter is even further along in KO’s and Hao Mei’s lives, after the two begin living together in Hao Mei’s apartment.

It’s what I would say is the tipping point in their relationship, where Hao Mei realizes how much KO has come to mean to him.

Read the first two vignettes at Lil Bliss’s site about a thing or two happening in Hao Mei’s/KO’s lives.

Hope you like the chapter. Leave a comment if you do. 🙂

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No Light, Chapter 8 Updated

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Hey Everyone,

Sorry for the long wait, but here is Chapter 8: Si Yin? of my Three Lives, Three Worlds, Ten Miles of Peach Blossoms AU Fanfic.

Leave a comment if you like it. 🙂

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Beauty’s Alluring Smile, Chapter 5 Updated

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Hey Everyone,

Here is Chapter 5 Appeasing Him of Beauty’s Alluring Smile. Once again, it may be titled Chapter 5, but this installment is even further on in the drama, the last scene we see of all of these delightful characters before the drama ends.

A quick summary: After the previous developments, when KO and Hao Mei begin to live together, the others razz Hao Mei for just allowing KO in through the back door and begin living at his apartment. Hao Mei erupts, asking the coworker who is doing the teasing, would he wash the dishes, clean the floors, do laundry, cook, etc? The coworker says no. Hao Mei then tells him to shut up.

The company goes on a retreat, and Hao Mei eagerly shows off KO’s physique to the others. He then bets on him in a swimming race against Lao San and loses. He then bets on Lao San and loses, since KO told Xiao Nai to let him win. KO quietly swims away, clearly angered by Hao Mei’s betting shenanigans, and Hao Mei goes after him to appease him. Afterwards, KO cooks for everyone, and Hao Mei keeps his eyes on him the entire time. Yugong chides him for being in danger of eating up the chef. Hao Mei assures him that his vigilance is only for the food. A game begins, and Hao Mei wins two skewers. While playfully offering it to Yugong, he then ends up giving it to KO, who stares at him in surprise and then accepts the food.

Watch the scenes here – Dramafever Love O2O (Episodes 29)

This chapter happens smack dab in the middle of the scenes, where there is some … appeasement going on to the unhappy person, and then a continuation to what happens afterwards.

Note: Something different in the drama, the team goes to buy suits and everyone dresses up; Hao Mei clearly notices KO looking good in his all black clothes. He even fixes KO’s clothes for him. 🙂  I loved how they showed the two interacting, and that hint of awareness Hao Mei has for KO before he brushes it off. (Episode 27 for those of you interesting in watching.)

Enjoy.

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No Light, Chapter 7 Updated

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Hey everyone,

Sorry for the long wait, but here is Chapter 7: Playing the Pity Game of my Three Lives, Three World, Ten Miles of Peach Blossoms AU Fanfic.

I hope everyone has a wonderful 2018.

Leave a comment if you like it. 🙂

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Beauty’s Alluring Smile, Chapter 4 Updated

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Hey Everyone,

Here is Chapter 4 of Beauty’s Alluring Smile. Once again, it may be titled Chapter 4, but this installment is even further on in the drama and many more things have happened in between.

A quick summary:  Everyone notices that with KO working at Zhi Yi, taking up more of the workload, Hao Mei is more relaxed. When Hao Mei gets lazy, KO steps up and offers his services. Hao Mei then says he’ll do his part. He realizes that KO also has a lot of work to do. When they have a free afternoon, Hao Mei asks KO to go out to lunch with him. He tells KO he needs to try new dishes and learn from the cook. This shows the development of their friendship.

One afternoon, KO, Hao Mei and friends go out to eat, and their shared past is revealed. KO discovers that Hao Mei was his  gaming friend, and Hao Mei discovers that this was the male he ran away from. Subsequently, KO bugs Hao Mei about getting married in the game, which Hao Mei refuses.  And Laosan ends up deciding.

Read the scene here – Chapter 45: Let Me Be Your Sidekick

Watch the scenes here – Dramafever Love O2O (Episodes 22 and 24) – The show did a great job of adapting these scenes.

This chapter happens smack dab in the middle of those two scenes.

Enjoy.

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